MyDarlingLove's Fanfiction

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Post MyDarlingLove Posted 03 Feb 2013, 5:50 PM

MyDarlingLove's Fanfiction

My first fanfic. Should I do more? Please comment!!!


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I am walking in the snow alone on a lit up street, taking in the chilly yet magically first snow fall of the year. Bundled up in my trench coat hat and scarf. Suddenly SeungHyun comes out of nowhere, grabs me by the waist pulling me into him, leaving me no choice but to inhale his aroma of a cinnamon and a hint of smoke. He looks deep into my eyes, which in turn makes my breath hitch. He leans forward ever so slowly. I close my eyes knowingly and he gives me the most passionate kiss ever, Taking my breath away in the process, it feels like it lasts for a million years. He slowly pulls away almost taking me and my lips with him. My eyes flutter open and he looks at me intensively. Then he slowly gives me a little smirk and swiftly walks away almost like he vanished into thin air. I wake up from my trans state to the sudden feeling of coldness due to his missing warmth and of his lack of presence. I look around and there is no one in the street but me.
 
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Post zanji Posted 03 Feb 2013, 5:59 PM

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As long as it's not smutty (I'd be so scarred reading about Big Bang doingnasty stuff) then go for it!
Liked the picture you added as well, it's kinda what it looks like outside now ^_^
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Post MyDarlingLove Posted 03 Feb 2013, 6:59 PM

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LOL I don't write smut. I'm a christian....I won't. The question is did you like this one-shot?
 
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Post leyassi Posted 04 Feb 2013, 12:09 PM

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You should continue it. I love it...

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Post MyDarlingLove Posted 05 Feb 2013, 12:58 AM

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Thanks... Image I'm working on a series write now so it won't be too long before there is a new story.
 
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Post leyassi Posted 05 Feb 2013, 10:03 AM

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MyDarlingLove wrote:Thanks... Image I'm working on a series write now so it won't be too long before there is a new story.




Just let me know when you've finished it. Oh, do you have an account in Wattpad? You should. I'll subscribe to you.
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Post ladyperona Posted 07 Feb 2013, 5:32 AM

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I said it before, and I'm gonna say it again... I LOVE IT!! Kekekee

You have a very good sense of wording, I got chills when I read them...
Looking forward to more of ur fanfic.. I request some Daeeee..
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